Thread:GreekTelepath/@comment-6986530-20170408063612/@comment-4698889-20170409065814

Hi. I suggested the "use either complex or compound sentences" because that's what we tend to do. It's usually "asking x, she did y before seeing z", as opposed to "she asked x. she did y. she saw z." I'm not sure if I communicated that well, I apologize.

I also expanded your section regarding summarizing and changed the example to Gallerian's page, since I felt that that really reflected the difference between our old style and our new style.