Thread:GreekTelepath/@comment-6192846-20150331131018/@comment-6192846-20150401141113

GreekTelepath wrote: Hi Servy! I've made some progress with the Demons of Sin article in my Sandbox. Just two things about it: Far more brief, though not as brief as gods. Because we know of so few demons, cover major events involving them (such as DoGlutt's death and Banica's replacement). Don't harp on the vessels. They have their article. Focus on the actual demons. Seth Twiright ends up in Hellish Yard?
 * 1) I just copy-pasted the History section from Vessels of Sin as a base. Should I make it more in-depth, or more brief?
 * 2) The Biology and Appearance section is done, but my writing's a bit all over the place. Could you help me with it?

That's a big change of scenery so write that in. Demon of Lust going around to Sati, Gast, and others? A simple sentence toward the beginning describing the demons making contracts and causing calamities over the centuries will suffice.

This article shouldn't be very large. Its history can and should be written in broad strokes. The important thing is acknowledging the individual demons existence when each vessel is made (Eve omitted for obvious reasons).