Thread:Guardian of Time and Space/@comment-5180718-20150806154609

Could you please beta this? I don't know if you've beta read before, but you said you wanted to see it, so here it is.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FBR_sHeS6-kDo4xHnv5pYCGMYH0ovR892Omemm-K69g/edit

It's not particularly good. Sorry. 