Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6192846-20150822000535/@comment-23.122.217.39-20150825024211

In general, misunderstanding verb tense, particles, certain grammatical forms, omitted subjects, cutting out at least one line altogether, misusing attributive form, cutting out phrases, etc.

I don't want to list them all out on here because there really are quite a few, but here are some specific examples:

-The line "From here on you will be reborn" is cut entirely from the translation (the line right before "Today is your Re_birthday").

-"He said, his arms covered up in burns, 'what is the thing I was?'"--> this line is supposed to read more like, "With his arms covered in burns, he touched 'the thing that used to be me'"

-"And there was this song"--> this is supposed to read more like "Yes, this was formerly such a song".

-"Also the purpose changes with a new body" --> this is supposed to read more like "If my body changes then my purpose changes as well"

-"I was created by that person" -->this line is continued on in the next one, it is supposed to read "Just like that person created me"