User blog comment:Malice Twiright/A Disscussion on Irregular./@comment-146.113.75.124-20150601144240

Some nitpicks. Not all of these seem relevant to Irregular but the fact that you brought them up suggests to me that you believe they are:

1. The time of day where Riliane is captured was not stated in the song. That's a detail from the novel.

2. Riliane did not burn Elphegort to the ground. She burned part of the forest and slaughtered their women.

3. The narrator did not theorize that the chains were rage and tears, he theorized that they were blood and tears.

4. The message he recieved did not occur before the chains dissipated, the message was the light that fell down.

5. Irregular did not state that he was inside of the Master of the Court in Cappriccio Farce. That was his character profile that said that. All he said was the lullaby and then "the resounding of Irregular's beat".

I feel like you've included some details that aren't relevant and omitted details that may be relevant. For example, you describe all of what happens in Daughter of Evil and Servant of Evil (when a simple summary would suffice), even going so far as to talk about Michaela and Clarith (despite acknowledging that it's not relevant), but you don't mention the spring in Re_Birthday, the tiny light, or that he makes the statement "we're going to meet again" at the end.