Talk:Hereditary Evil Raiser Syndrome/@comment-23.117.121.93-20150323151647

"Under normal circumstances, the chance of a fetus being born with the HER gene is 1/65530. Similarly, the chance of a fetus with the HER gene being born is 1/9999. As a result, the chance of someone being born with the HER gene is 1/655234470."

This line is incredibly clunky and hard to understand. Am I assuming right that the 1/65530 chance is the chance of a fetus having the HER gene, and the 1/9999 is the chance for a HER-bearing fetus to be brought to term/born? There's got to be a better way to phrase that.