User blog comment:AFlowerMustNotBeUnsightly/Lust roleswap-- Gumina as Cherubim./@comment-166.168.233.157-20140427235148

Overall everyone is pretty in character for this, the only one who seems a little OOC is Cherubim. Firstly, I can't see him ever turning away Gumina under any circumstances. He'd probably think she was mad to want him but he'd still take her up on it, no questions asked. Even after the sexual slavery and murder I can't see him ever stop adoring her. Secondly, I don't think Cherubim would be able to run Asmodean on his own without Asmodeus in his head or Gumina helping him. He never had any formal education and probably didn't know too much about politics, not to mention the mental issues he would have to have due to his childhood would get in the way and the fact he would probably be going insane on his own after Gumina was suddenly and painfully taken away from him, along having to keep up the lie for the rest of his life about who he was which again, I don't think he would be able to do without Asmodeus. It just seems more likely he'd run Asmodean into the ground or flee to somewhere else like Gumina did. The two other things that bother me don't have to do with the characterization but they just don't sit right with me. One, it doesn't make sense why Gumina can't just kill her in-laws on her own, if Cherubim can do it simply fueled by rage than she should be able to do it with the powers of Hell. Second, it seems kind if cruel of Gumina to change Cherubim's appearance if she was really in love with him. Gumina didn't really need a Venomania to stay in control of Asmodean, she could have just let Beelzania pick a new Duke and started building the harem in peace. And even if Cherubim needed to be changed to look like Sateriasis it should be by Irina or Gumina wanted to do something nice for him by removing the second face and ends up altering the rest of his body by accident. I do really like this concept and am glad to see more Venomania role swaps where Gumina is possessed by Lust, I just think this need a little editing.