User blog comment:Servant of Evillious/Gift - Chapters A-F/@comment-5131141-20140921022628

Ugh... I'll give it to mothy, Chapter C is exactly what I'd expect to read from a teenage girl. The writing is so jumbled and over the place, it's almost ADD. I specially love the Homer-like "Love is like jam. Hmm Jam..." XD

She also seems really glad "Elluka" doesn't pity her but accepts her obvious, obvious lie that she's happy. And there's a couple lines that foreshadows the twist ending (She remembers things from when she was a baby, she doesn't remember what jam tastes like, etc), so that's nice.