Thread:GreekTelepath/@comment-24205135-20140822132742

Hi, Greek!

I see you updated your Wrath article. Unfortunately, I cannot post there.

I took the Spanish video in consideration and heavily revised the translation. V. The Pierrot also revised the Romaji, and he even helped me add partial timestamps and slightly improve on the accuracy. The new lyrics are on the "revised" page.

Here's the link:http://theevilliouschronicles.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Seven_Heavenly_Virtues/Master_of_Hellish_Yard_%E2%80%93_Revised

From what I get from them, this verse in  the original translation is inaccurate:

This place should never exist This deathly hell will be used by a powerful lord

The corresponding Romaji is:

Chi murareta jigoku (2:53) Eviriosu o kiero

"Eviriosu o kiero" has been confirmed both by User:Misstress of the heavenly yard and V. The Pierrot. Not only that, but "blood-soaked hell", too.

Considering that, a better rendering is:

This place – Evillious – not supposed to exist, shall turn into a blood-soaked hell.

V. The Pierrot also helped me improving the accuracy slightly of the English rendering. "Beneath" was changed to "Ahead" (lit. "in front of me"), and I added the "keyhole" was "small", thus giving:

"It has a little key lock".

I hope it helps. 