Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6192846-20130913170916/@comment-6192846-20140429012803

To piggy back off of this comment, it's an important plot point about the Goula disease being used for the undead soldiers in Praeludium and Praefacio. In the case of Ron Grapple, whose implied to have died of being "grappled" by Arte and Pollo (before Banica even made use of the Glass), he's still resurrected.

The suggestion is to change the notion: "Those killed by the epidemic can be reanimated as Undead Soldiers..." to something else.

The best way to understand this would be to find and translate the passage with Ron but, like Witnis Truth, he doesn't seem to have an obvious monologue to draw upon. Thoughts?

I'd also like to suggest changing "goula" back to "gula" or instead to "ghoula". While I get "goula" (like in Goulag) match the romaji (guura) in pronunciation, I feel most would pronounce it as "gaola". I think Gula or Ghoula would be a more accurate reference to the disease and the Glass (which the "gout" trivia we have out it seems contrived imo).