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hope I'm not late for this discussion

I really dislike the plot twists because they feel so forced or contrived, and I feel like we were cheated out of a good story, the one we were originally told via the song. What's even worse is that it had such a great build up until the twist screws it up...

The plot twists with Margarita have been hinted at for a long time pre-novel, and therefore the plot twist was perfectly executed so that it was unexpected but made sense the more you examined it. The song makes even more sense with the twist revealed.

The events in the Tailor song are rendered non-canon technically, there was little envy, and it feels like mothy was trying too hard to make Kayo a "special" sinner like Margarita was, not to mention storylines that go nowhere (hopefully they'll be brought up next novel)

tbh I feel like nothing happened in this novel except Kayo and Ma swapped bodies and a family was murdered. How did Kayo cause a world shaking event, again? I still don't understand.

but also Behemo. yaaay~