Thread:Octofan/@comment-4698889-20161008042148/@comment-6986530-20161008141515

I'll have to do a more thorough reading later but first thing I noticed is that you probably should not be more or less lifting your text direct from the plot summary. The conversation between Gallerian and Loki should not be taking up four paragraphs. I understand that this is in keeping with the old wiki tradition of "write down literally everything" but it reads incredibly awkwardly.

I haven't made the new guides and rules for our wiki standards yet, but no one ever took issue with the new quality of writing I and the anon proposed some time ago, demonstrated by the Gallerian article in my sandbox, so please use that as a guide. Michelle Marlon's new page is also a decent example of the kind of writing I'm looking for.

More commentary when I get back pfff.