Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-23.122.217.39-20150626042307/@comment-23.122.217.39-20150725223957

Fine, but we still have to arrive at some sort of resolution regarding these two titles.

Keeping in mind both titles within context of each other, and how the phrases are structured, here's the options as I see them with their strengths and weaknessness:

1. The Abandonment Moonlit Tale w/ The Ending Moonlit Tale (Most clearly conveys the connection between both titles, is accurate, and fits the original title structure the best. But the first one can potentially cause a bit of confusion for those not familiar with the reasons why it's translated that way)

2. The Moonlit Tale of Abandonment w/ The Moonlit Tale of the Ending (Less grammatically confusing, still technically correct. But the second one suggests something different than what it actually means, and doesn't really quite fit in the intended structure)

3. Moonlit Tale(s): Abandonment w/ Moonlit Tale(s): The Ending (Much less grammatically confusing and also clearly conveys the connection between both titles. But it is very different from the intended structure, and again, suggests something a little different for the second one than it should)

We could also mix and match a little, like "The Moonlit Tale of Abandonment" paired with "The Ending Moonlit Tale". It won't keep the titles as closely linked but it may fix some of the other issues.

And while I do not support these because they dont' adhere to the real meaning as closely and the titles dont' mirror each other this way, there's:

4. A Tale of Abandonment on a Moonlit Night w/ End of the Moonlit Night Tales

There's probably other variations we could arrive that but that's how I'm seeing it.

I still vote for option 1.