Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-23.122.217.39-20150626042307/@comment-26209808-20150725145722

Servant of Evillious wrote: ForTheLoveOfHellish wrote: Regarding the "And then the Girl went Mad - End of a Moonlit Night -" wouldn't the simplest change be to alter the final word? Regardless of the Abandoned change, all three refer to it being a "tale". So I'd reccomend changing "End of a Moonlit Night" to "End of the/a Moonlit Tale" (If it's decided to change the title to A Tale of Moonlit Abandonment then it would be End of "A" Moonlit Tale. The other two make it sound as if it's the one and only "The" Moonlit Tale.) I'd prefer if we kept the phrasing consistent with the Japanese structure but it's not the biggest deal in the world. If we go with "Tale of Moonlit Abandonment", I'd be fine with "End of a Moonlit Tale".

Ahhhh, sorry I made a small mistake, I meant if it was changed to "A tale of abandonment of a moonlit night" then make it "End of A Moonlit Tale". I fixed it now, sorry!