Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6192846-20140612134000/@comment-6192846-20140825002933

All right. I can live with us being vague. Who knows. Maybe the Gift novel will mention it and connect the events together (especially if it somehow leap frogs off them changing their hair color then).

I do have one small translation suggestion for the song though (and I believe I've pointed it out on chat too). I'd like us to change "Longwall" to "Great Wall". I feel it's a less awkward term to use in English and better describes the scenario.

The Japanese name for the Great Wall of China  is 万里の長城 (literally "long/tall/great castle of thousands of miles"). The same 長 is used for our "Longwall".

With that in mind, whether the people portrayed here are based on Chinese or not, I think it would just be better to have it be named:

"The Journey of Two Mages ~Great Wall and Watchman~"

That's my two cents.