Talk:Eve Moonlit/@comment-2607:FB90:382B:CE51:EC4E:13F4:64F8:7A06-20181219212400

This may sound a bit nitpicky but the quote under the “original sin” section is cited as being “Eve during her hysterics” which I think is a rather unfortunate word choice considering the fact that this is referring to her suffering from the trauma of losing her children. Perhaps it should be reworded in a way that doesn’t have connotations of irrationality/ridicule?