Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-4698889-20171205212736/@comment-6986530-20180305222332

I agree with Tobimisa, the PV is too old and too metaphorical for us to assume that it depicts Maria Moonlit.

I'm not sure what your point about Kayo is saying, we're using the image from the book as her avi. (It's also not stated as fact that the PV depicts Kayo's purple dream, I personally find it unlikely and there's other available interpretations.)

Remove the assumptions about Barbara (that Irina presumably killed her and that it was after giving up Aybee Cee, you don't need to say those things) and fix the weird grammar error in the Aybee Cee sentence. Also remove the blurb about the Zero family. Then you can post it.

For the factory worker, again fix the typos and take out the assumptions you don't need to say (nothing says that the man was married.)