User blog comment:Darkwarrior101/EC one-shot/@comment-25342416-20140826051503

My apologies, once more; I'll clarify.

I meant that it would help if you gave a more thorough description of the action sequences- particulary of what happens after the button is pressed. The internal thoughts, while helpful, interrupt the action going on, and it would be great if there was an equal amount of both, so that the reader doesn't get lost.

Hope this helps!