Thread:Servant of Evillious/@comment-4698889-20160528175237

Hi Servy! Could you please look over what I've made for Kagura in my Sandbox? Basically I treated all narration like dialogue and summarized any dialogue that isn't between her and Ma. Please tell me if I need to change anything before I continue. I'm not sure if what I'm doing will work though, since things may end up rather long. 