Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-28382753-20151014204224

So, I was reading through the EC tag in Tumblr, when I saw an idea someone had: what if there were a version of Seven Crimes and Punishments where each sinner sang in the real world language they should? Like, Venomania in Arabic, Conchita in Latin or Spanish, Rillane in French, etc.

The guy said it was just a fantasy, but I said "why not?" So I was hoping that you could help me. With a little collaboration from users who speak those languages, maybe we can come up with something singable and that rhymes more or less.

Spanish is my mother tongue, I can speak English, and I was able to translate a French line with a dictionary. But I would still need a lot of help to complete the song. So I thought this was an oportunity for us to collaborate and help each other.

Here's what I've got:

French

"Commençons"

(Let's start)

Arabic (to be translated)

Seven flowers dance, the sins now released

 My ugly real face is concealed,

 Continuing to drown in lust

Spanish

Siete semillas caen aquí, echan raíces en la tierra gris

(Seven seeds fall in here, they take root in the gray dirt)

 Luego todo lo que veis se disolverá en mi interior

(Therefore all you see will dissolve inside of me)

 Incluídos la luna y el sol

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">(Including the sun and the moon)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">French (halfway there)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">C'est construit sur les pierres précieuses,

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">(It's built upon the gemstones)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> My Evil’s Kingdom is already unstoppable

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">English

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Pitiful twins who sing with a grin

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> From you were born the vessels of sin

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> What kind of tale shall you tell us next

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Now sing about the Seven Crimes and Punishments!

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">German (to be translated)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Through the seven winds, the world is violated by poison

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">'' I, the source of everything, didn’t sleep today either,''

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">'' Laments the false sin''

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">(Japanese)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Nanatsu no izumi ni wa aisuru hito no omokage

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> Dakedo chigau kage ga itsumo utsurikomu no

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> Omaetachi sae inakereba

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Russian (to be translated)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">In the court buried in the soil,

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> Now, let us begin the farce I call a trial

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">English

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"><span style="font-family:Arial,sans-serif;line-height:0.58cm;">The only thing that everyone wants

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> is to achieve their utopia

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> What kind of end shall this story met?

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Now sing about the Seven Crimes and Punishments!

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Russian (to be translated)

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Do you hear the song of the forest?

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">'' ''

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">No, it is my gunshot of destruction

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">English

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Pitiful twins who sing with a grin

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> From you were born the vessels of sin

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;"> What kind of tale shall you tell us next

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">Now sing about the Seven Crimes and Punishments!

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">

<p style="border-style:none;border-width:initial;padding:0cm;line-height:0.58cm;orphans:1;">I doubt we will get to sing it, but I just though it would be fun to work together on something like this. <ac_metadata title="Multilanguage &quot;Seven Crimes and Punishments&quot; Project"> </ac_metadata>