User blog comment:Triuberit/Drug of Gold/@comment-146.113.71.50-20150227061834

This translation has several errors. I won't go through all of them because that would take too long, but some of the more obvious (to me) lines that you got wrong are:

家族に疎まれ次代に歪んでた心 "But my family only deem my opinions as whims of a crazy heart" is actually closer to-->"neglected by my family my heart was gradually warped"

ただ生き 続けるだけの日々 "I was lucky to survive each day"-->"I was only living each day."

彼女はもう人でなくなっていた "She's no longer the person I once knew"-->"She was no longer a human/person"

「そろそろお暇をもらえませんか？」 "Don't you have spare time to spend with me soon?" -->Carlos is the one saying this, not Conchita--it's his line from her song. "Before long can I take a vacation?"

I suppose a common thread I'm seeing is that many of the lines seem accurate at a glance, but they often ignore the grammar of what was said, add in things that weren't in the original lyrics or removes things that are supposed to be there, make small mistakes that change the meaning in a big way, fail to recognize context (for example, you wrote something that was more accurately "her household fell into ruin" as "her home collapsed"), and in general is accurate enough to get a feel for the song but bad enough to be untrustworthy for anything more than that.

My apologies if this comes across as offensive to you but considering all the problems it's caused this community, mistranslation is a bit of an issue with me (particularly mistranslation presented as being wholly accurate).