Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-6192846-20130812010713/@comment-6192846-20140522160335

Speaking of Kiril, I want to point out that while he is called "Kiril Clockworker" (translating katakana), the name the booklet says he earned is also "Clockworker" not "Clockwork maker" as was in the Chinese(?) translation.

I'll be making that change now.

The problem with "us" is that it's vague. Does us mean "us people", as in compared to everyone in the world, Kiril thought Irina was the least likely be a HER because she was different?

If he meant "us HERs" then that doesn't really make sense with the succeeding lines. He points out how different she is:

"I thought my sister was different. That child was different from us. Her appearance was different. Her personality was different. So I thought it was alright. She was not like a HER. Even though I believed so."

If "us" meant "all HERs except my sister", then yeah, it would be an acknowledgement of him being a HER but thinking his sister wasn't one too. At the same time, it sounds odd he would be aware he's a HER yet oblivious to the delusion that happens to him, but maybe I'm being too critical.