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Also I missed you saying the Greeonio and Lucif pages were done but; change the bit where it says she abandoned her son and then passed away. The order of events could well be that she died, the Clockworker's Doll took on her appearance and then left the brothel, which would be how she abandoned the son. You can also add that Gilbert and Mikulia Calgaround's marriage led to no children and Gilbert died under strange circumstances. Otherwise it's fine.

For the Lucifs, it's spelled "C-Section" (and you don't technically have to say that outside of saying that he took the children out of her womb.) I also don't think we know that the son was the one who kept the lineage going, there's no need to specify. There's other tiny things to fix but that's the main thing.