Thread:Servant of Evillious/@comment-4698889-20160303223438/@comment-6192846-20160304013334

No prob. I'd be slightly more detailed about the contents of Ma's discussion with the narrator in the first paragraph. Since the exact year isn't mentioned in the text, keep it to just "four years ago" or something similar. May want to reword the Mei portion since coming to and just hearing it might give the wrong impression. Fix those nitpicks and it's a perfectly solid summary of the first 24 pages.