Talk:Nemesis Sudou/@comment-44316806-20191121073230

Hello, I know there was just a discussion about this trivia piece, however, there are still some small grammer corrections that should be made.

"Despite this, Nemesis' manufacturing of Punishment and her initial test of it on Jakoku parallel the United States during the Manhattan Project, with Nemesis saying, "Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds" as said by scientist J. Robert Oppenheimer; the themes of nuclear warfare are strengthened by the destruction of the First Period, which is also being implied to be via nuclear warfare."

The parts in bold should be added to correct grammer. Also, I do not know if the quote is stylized that way or if it should say, "Now I have become Death,..."

Sorry for the long comment, the thread on this was closed before I could suggest edits. Thank you.